As though I am built of some other material
That neither you nor I can make out
Whether you are shapeshifting or maybe I
Beautiful warm burgundy animal blood
Humping thumping breathing organs
Fingerprint all my genes awake
Ancient codes in each and every cell
Popping flesh bubbles and children unborn
It’s my turn it’s my turn it’s my turn it’s mine
Survival in the love and war of the breeders
Horniness half hysterical on a cliff edge
Commanding a thousand valleys a thousand streams
Hot savage bliss in the climax to live on
Significant insignificance as we bow our heads
To surrender to such violence in rebirth.
Copyright © Nomzi Kumalo, 2014.
Originally posted 15 March 2014
Beautiful and dramatic! You have such talent
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Thank you dear Tabby. Dramatic indeed. 😀 Have a lovely evening.
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YES, GIRL.
SO IMPRESSED!
KEEP WRITING.
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Thanks dear. 🙂
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Accomplished!
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Thanks Khaya. Is the snow melting that side?
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You welcome! The snow is far from melting though some days are warmer resulting in a slippery surface. It’s still pretty much winter, with little hints of spring:-)
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Indeed. And I know that it can snow any minute. 😀 Have a lovely afternoon Khaya.
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Raw, dramatic and oh so authentic!
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More wonderful news. Thank you Lady Fi. Are you well? 🙂
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Wow, amazing poetry.
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Thank you Nicodemas. Wonderful news. 🙂
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I love this, Nomzi! It’s so REAL.
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😀 Thanks Jane. It is isn’t it. I am so happy that you love it. 🙂
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I do second that our poems are indeed relatives. Urgency colliding with vitality. I think it will be fun to take a look at them side by side. Anyhow, have a good night Jane.
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Yes I do see similarities in our thoughts. Cannot say the same about our styles though, for you are a wonderful wonderful poet while Im just trying to get by. 🙂
How lovely it is to find another soul just waiting be to be found. Yours is a beautiful piece.
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Wonderful. Yes our styles are very different and we explore other different themes as well, yet ultimately we talk about connecting as humans. We speak differently so that a variety of people can understand and appreciate what we are saying. I love the tenderness in yours. Thank you for your kind words and do not underestimate the power of your words. 🙂
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Kindness begets kindness and love makes the world to round. Happy to have your acquaintance. 🙂
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Indeed it does. I feel the same Manan. 🙂
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I am so impressed that you can find the words to produce the above…a true gift from the gods of the script.
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I am so glad that you appreciate it so. Thanks Paula. I wish you a day full of creative impulses. 🙂
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